04-17-2014, 09:30 PM
I had no trouble saying
It’s NOT for YOU,
though COME what MAY.
And even
For DON'T you KNOW
what IS your PLACE
If PAINED inSIDE,
Still SMILE on FACE.
could work for me meter or accent-wise, but these 4 lines are the most awkward for me, a stretch to make sense of.
And is the title meant to be on or one?
It’s NOT for YOU,
though COME what MAY.
And even
For DON'T you KNOW
what IS your PLACE
If PAINED inSIDE,
Still SMILE on FACE.
could work for me meter or accent-wise, but these 4 lines are the most awkward for me, a stretch to make sense of.
And is the title meant to be on or one?
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