Coffee Cup -edited

[JakMak]

I love it! I'm all about that sappy shit anyway lol esp loved that 5th line "I imagined I tasted your kiss on the rim" It's actually unique in the love it describes, you wrote from the angle of a matured, comfortable and familiar love, something that develops over time, a seasoned love, the flavors therein have had a chance to deepen, its not the sugar of intimate passion, nor is it the wine of aged doting dotage, but instead it's... well... coffee lol morning ritual in relationships is as much a part of it as anything else, and to still find appreciation for your partner in the mornings, (my girl had a hard time with me in mornings lol, i'm not a morning person at all, but the rhythm of our mornings and the frequency that morning perturbs one's sleep makes it ritual lol) says that your love is very much alive, it hasn't reached a stagnant place... so much one can see into your life with these 8 simple lines... great poem... I'm not sure about the metering... when i count my syllables i usually count the I's, but perfectly metered or not, still a great feeling to find oneself in the midst of