Sometimes I Feel

[milo]

Sometimes in life I feel,
That I struggle to know what's real.
I see a darker shade in the distance,
I look over to reach and to touch,
but it fades away out my clutch.
I still go back to that place daily.
Looking and speaking to the sky,
people walk by and ask me why.
But i don't have to explain,
what happened to me and my brain.

there seems to be a bunch of superfluous wording. For example - sometimes /in life/ i feel. Well, if you're feeling we can assume you are alive without you pointing it out.

Statements like "I look over to reach and touch" just don't actually make sense at all. Don't look to touch, just walk over and do it.

"but it fades away out my clutch" - what is it? When did it get in your clutch? The shade? How did you clutch a shade?

"I still go back to that place daily" - what place? What is the significance to you going there?

All in all the whole thing says nothing interesting and takes a long walk around the park to do it.

Good luck.