NaPM April 16 2014

[ChristopherSea]

Walter

He gave his spirit full command,
directing it with deft control.
When life asked him to take a stand
he gave his spirit full command
but listened with his heart in hand,
and when death came to claim his soul
he gave his spirit full command,
directing it with deft control.


(meh, first try at triolet)

Hey, this is fine. I just got excited by the form, as it looked easy. My attempt lies tangled and listless! Perhaps, tomorrow I can get the knots out.