The Guy in Apartment 33

[Mopkins]

Ok, that will need to be completely revised...
It was 10 syllables long, but what makes it iambic is that every other syllable is a "hard" syllable correct?

yep -an iamb is da DUM - you have it correct in some lines -

The ap/pari/tion watched/ the clock/ again
daDUM daDUM daDUM daDUM daDUM

I'm having fun getting the hang of it too, Good luck to you



Marianne