NaPM April 14 2014
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(04-15-2014, 07:03 PM)justcloudy Wrote:   Stowaway

Circular racks of Walmart clothes
made the best hiding places
when big brother was seeking.
Inside I was invisible, invincible.
The carpet smelled dusty as I sat
on the iron X in the center
fingering the different fabrics in turn.

One time he never found me.

My tummy grew heavy and hot
once I crawled out and found the cart gone.
I panted, glued to a pole in the center
of the plus sized women’s clothes,
till a man in a blue polo told me to follow him.
He had a yellow-faced pin like the stickers the old lady
gave us after mom paid, reaching from her wheelchair.
After plodding light-headed for years I spied layaway
and my red-faced mom.
just cloudy, My daughter pulled off this same stunt and scared us half to death. We had informed the store and they placed a sales person at the only exit. Five minutes later our little one called out from within one of those clothing rack rounds you write of. You naughty girls! It was a harrowing experience for us all. Your poem vividly evoked that sinking feeling and time dilation (it seemed like an hour). Undecided Well done/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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NaPM April 14 2014 - by milo - 04-14-2014, 10:46 PM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by Erthona - 04-15-2014, 01:24 AM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-15-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-15-2014, 01:44 AM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by milo - 04-15-2014, 07:01 AM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by Keith - 04-15-2014, 09:03 AM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-15-2014, 05:38 PM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by justcloudy - 04-15-2014, 07:03 PM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-15-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by justcloudy - 04-15-2014, 08:21 PM
RE: NaPM April 14 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 01:46 AM



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