A moment of greed

[Simba]

I really love the first two lines of this poem. The rhyme seems really natural and works really well. However, the later rhymes seem to be really forced and they just don't need to be. Maybe losing the rhyme altogether in the rest of the poem and just writing what you want to write rather than what simply rhymes with the last word of the previous line would help a lot! Really do love the first two lines though!!