Black Widow
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Hi LV, for me the whole piece was cliche, it carried nothing new to stimulate my senses within the subject matter. I have written quite a few on the same subject, looking for a new angle. (not an easy matter). I realise the simplicity may have been by "design" but if so it did not work for me this time....seeya. JG
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Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-01-2014, 01:56 AM
RE: Black Widow - by Erthona - 04-01-2014, 02:23 PM
RE: Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-01-2014, 11:41 PM
RE: Black Widow - by JakMak - 04-12-2014, 11:49 PM
RE: Black Widow - by tectak - 04-13-2014, 01:08 AM
RE: Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-13-2014, 10:45 PM
RE: Black Widow - by tectak - 04-15-2014, 05:57 PM
RE: Black Widow - by Brownlie - 04-13-2014, 01:18 AM
RE: Black Widow - by John Galt - 04-14-2014, 03:24 AM
RE: Black Widow - by JakMak - 04-15-2014, 06:35 PM
RE: Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-16-2014, 12:07 AM



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