The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End
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As a beginner, I find myself reading a poem several times looking to understand the story and subject involved. With this I have envisioned Groves of giant walnut trees to the last dinosaur trying to hatch the last egg. I don't know if this is a weakness or a blessing of my own.
You have painted a fantastic setting for my imagination, I would love to save this poem for future enjoyment.

As for feedback, I would ask: why is the break in the first stanza in mid sentence?... " Once ten-thousand spawning behemoths trenched the river soil."
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The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by crow - 03-28-2014, 03:02 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by David Garland - 04-05-2014, 09:16 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by Thoughtjotter - 04-10-2014, 11:15 AM



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