A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu
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"You liked it, then?
Though that would not be considered valid crit and I would need to ban you...Ah, how fortune swings the points; stars by night, lodestone by day. North by north east...we tack the winds, that once blew us the other way."

Ach! Da nae be putting words in my mouth laddie. I said "I've nae grievance to cite against this poem." Which means (in the Kings English, if I spoke it), it has it's problems, but it doesn't impinge upon the clarity, but not having anything bad to say about it, is a far crying from liking the ankle biting little brute! Ban me or don't, I prefer "Old Spice" for my deodorant (I swear, give an' inch and they'll take your hand. Pray for the poor man's neck muscles as that melon sitting on top of them grows to bursting. "Wobbles like a drunk he must". Get out of here ya backwards talking leprechaun), but I da nae see me underarms as any of yer business. Seems to me you should take reference of your own arm before it breaks!

Dae MacDae of the clan MacDae
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 01:09 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by ellajam - 04-10-2014, 01:39 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 01:48 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by abu nuwas - 04-10-2014, 02:47 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 06:28 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies edit 0.0001abu - by tectak - 04-10-2014, 08:33 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by ellajam - 04-10-2014, 02:57 AM
RE: A Crofter Dies - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 06:10 AM



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