NaPM April 9 2014
#4
Saturation Point

What was a giggle's now a groan and a roar,
an ocean of turning tides, sea-legs buckling.
You're aware of calls above the surface
but they're an incomprehensible murmur
as brain cells and receptors abandon ship, leaving
behind someone who looks vaguely like you...
goal achieved,
oblivion.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips

Reply


Messages In This Thread
NaPM April 9 2014 - by milo - 04-09-2014, 10:08 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by Blake - 04-10-2014, 01:03 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by Erthona - 04-10-2014, 01:59 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by ellajam - 04-10-2014, 02:24 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 02:25 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by Keith - 04-10-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by trueenigma - 04-10-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by milo - 04-10-2014, 01:53 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by milo - 04-10-2014, 11:21 AM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-10-2014, 07:48 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by trueenigma - 04-10-2014, 02:29 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-10-2014, 02:54 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-10-2014, 03:56 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by justcloudy - 04-11-2014, 06:27 PM
RE: NaPM April 9 2014 - by Mopkins - 04-12-2014, 01:45 AM



Users browsing this thread:
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!