04-08-2014, 02:45 AM
You don't sing much more unclearly than a lot of rock and rollers, maybe even more clearly than some, but yeah the distortion is fairly high on the vocals. It seems to me you have a good voice, it is strong breath wise, and has good vibrancy, so no, it is not that you are a bad singer per se, but between the problems with your lyrics and the distortion in the vocals it is not clear. even if you sang every word in the lyrics clearly it wouldn't matter. In terms of do they make sense in context, I have no idea what the context is, but no, they don't make sense in or out of context. I suspect they are structured incorrectly as I can get little sense from them, but English is a high idiomatic language, so it is difficult because things do not translate literally. I think that you are probably having problems with the idioms which is not unusual. I am guessing you are Asian, probably Japanese, could be Chinese, but probably more likely Pacific Rim if not Japanese. Not a speaker of Hindi I think, they also have idiomatic problems, but different ones. Let me know how far off I am. It's been a long time since I worked with ESL students, so I've sort of lost my ear for it.
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Dale
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Dale
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The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.