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A moment of greed
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04-07-2014, 10:31 PM
I believe you wanted to say "shone" instead of "shinned"? You have some mistakes like that one and I'm not the best to correct you, I'm afraid. But more important thing is reading these line drew a beautiful picture in my mind and created unusual atmosphere in my soul and that's what art is about. The last line is very nice!
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A moment of greed - by denniswilson - 04-07-2014, 09:57 PM
RE: A moment of greed - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: A moment of greed - by California - 04-07-2014, 10:31 PM
RE: A moment of greed - by kindofahippy - 04-07-2014, 10:34 PM
RE: A moment of greed - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 12:34 AM
RE: A moment of greed - by denniswilson - 04-08-2014, 01:23 AM
RE: A moment of greed - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 01:35 AM
RE: A moment of greed - by Simba - 04-14-2014, 09:13 AM
RE: A moment of greed - by JakMak - 04-15-2014, 02:54 PM
RE: A moment of greed - by Am I A Poet? - 04-18-2014, 08:01 AM
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