I Wished I Was The Water -edited

I Wished I Was The Water -edited

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#10

04-07-2014, 09:04 PM

California - Oh, it sounds easy i know - but it's a bit like renaming one of your kids. This is an old poem I've dug out to see if I can improve it and I wrote it about 2002.

I'll keep your kind suggestion in mind - and try coming up with alternative titles for my baby.

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I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 07:44 PM

RE: The Shower - by ellajam - 04-06-2014, 10:15 PM

RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 10:36 PM

RE: The Shower - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 03:07 AM

RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 03:24 AM

RE: The Shower - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 05:10 AM

RE: The Shower - by California - 04-07-2014, 08:00 PM

RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 08:47 PM

RE: The Shower - by California - 04-07-2014, 08:55 PM

RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 09:04 PM