Gwyneth, welcome to the Pigpen! I must say I read your beautifully measured critique with a smile on my face because while I don't agree with all your points, but I do most certainly agree with your commitment to editing and improvement of your own work and that of others.
I didn't participate in the telephone (ask milo -- I do not play well with others), but I've kept a close eye on its progression and was very pleased to see forum members intermingling in a celebration of poetry.
I didn't participate in the telephone (ask milo -- I do not play well with others), but I've kept a close eye on its progression and was very pleased to see forum members intermingling in a celebration of poetry.
It could be worse