04-02-2014, 09:00 AM
Love this one, especially
The only place I had a problem was
Great run of poems you've been posting, traveling from my couch.
Quote:Morag stacks the cardboard boxes;It made me know her.
climbs the ladder up the rack.
In her head she scales the Munroes,
haversack upon her back;
on the mountain trail she follows,
memorised, a well-worn track.
The only place I had a problem was
Quote:but wears for him a silken bedgown,Who's "him"?
best he not see her private things.
Great run of poems you've been posting, traveling from my couch.
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