04-02-2014, 08:34 AM
Aside from the inversions which are a trade off and a given when reading your verse, I thoroughly enjoy this poem.
Since this is serious, I humbly submit this complaint about "naked flies", and "galore" is a bit over-done. (not by you and here, but by others elsewhere)
Since this is serious, I humbly submit this complaint about "naked flies", and "galore" is a bit over-done. (not by you and here, but by others elsewhere)