04-01-2014, 01:56 AM
She sits amid her silken treads,
hapless victims to ensnare.
An hourglass portends their fate,
a widows kiss awaits them there.
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Fire away. I know poems don't have to rhyme, it just worked out that way. One minor thing I'm not sure of... "a" or "the" to begin the last line?
Of course, I expect major things as well
Thanks,
Moose
hapless victims to ensnare.
An hourglass portends their fate,
a widows kiss awaits them there.
Pic
Fire away. I know poems don't have to rhyme, it just worked out that way. One minor thing I'm not sure of... "a" or "the" to begin the last line?
Of course, I expect major things as well

Thanks,
Moose
