The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End
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Number one---really like the tone of this, even though it's more story-like. Love the enjambment. Love the descriptive words, although at times it seems there may be a few too many. But that's up to you. I feel like it is really strong the way it stands.

bena
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The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by crow - 03-28-2014, 03:02 PM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by bena - 03-29-2014, 12:53 AM
RE: The Ghost Fruit Trees, Toward the End - by David Garland - 04-05-2014, 09:16 AM



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