03-26-2014, 08:50 AM
Chris,
" Hey, do you think making the line break after 'out' would illuminate that more? "
Maybe, I've had it both ways, this just happened to be the way it was when I posted it. Tomorrow might have been different. I think I left it this was because I wanted the caesura between "what was hers"....."and what was mine". Like weighing two items in your hands, trying to figure which is heaviest. I think that's what I was doing
(Actually my main concern was if this was too long to post here)
Thanks for the comments,
Dale
" Hey, do you think making the line break after 'out' would illuminate that more? "
Maybe, I've had it both ways, this just happened to be the way it was when I posted it. Tomorrow might have been different. I think I left it this was because I wanted the caesura between "what was hers"....."and what was mine". Like weighing two items in your hands, trying to figure which is heaviest. I think that's what I was doing
(Actually my main concern was if this was too long to post here)
Thanks for the comments,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.