03-26-2014, 01:40 AM
"Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain." 
Very hard hitting. I'm wondering about this line:
"pay them off with spinning whorls"
It makes me think of those hypnotism wheels. Is that what you mean or something I can't think of?
Very hard hitting. I'm wondering about this line:
"pay them off with spinning whorls"
It makes me think of those hypnotism wheels. Is that what you mean or something I can't think of?
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