03-24-2014, 03:30 PM
This poem is vague, but I think it could be helped worth an eye toward punctuation. There are words capitalized that needn't be, and commas in odd places. However, I loved the imagery the word choice this invoked.
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Just a trip
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Just a trip - by Hermit - 03-16-2014, 01:23 PM
RE: Just a trip - by John Galt - 03-17-2014, 09:25 PM
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RE: Just a trip - by Gypsy Irish - 03-24-2014, 03:30 PM
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