When done properly in either Anglo-Saxon poetry or using the Irish notion of uaim (with amus -- assonance and uaithne -- consonance), alliteration is not oppressive but necessary. Heaney studied both schools extensively and grew up in the tradition; still, reading Beowulf in one sitting without a fireside and a lot of whiskey can indeed become slightly tedious. The one redeeming feature of most modern attempts at alliterative verse is that at least they run out of steam very quickly.
PS. Ella, there's nothing wrong with writing with accent rather than perfect meter, it's just that if it's only accentual by accident then a smoothing-over with a meter rule will definitely serve you well
PS. Ella, there's nothing wrong with writing with accent rather than perfect meter, it's just that if it's only accentual by accident then a smoothing-over with a meter rule will definitely serve you well
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