03-23-2014, 11:13 PM
(03-23-2014, 11:00 PM)milo Wrote:Now, don't be making fun of my alliteration. It comes out that way and some of it is quite nice sounding. Feel free to point out anything specifically awful, but I won't chuck a line that I like the sound of to eliminate it. If it's not in style I don't mind being the odd man out.(03-23-2014, 10:52 PM)ellajam Wrote:Accentual verse is stress count /per line/ but modern reading has demoted the line break pause to near insignificance. If you were to make an audio of accentual verse I would be hard pressed to recognize it as other than free verse while metric verse (though also demoted in modern reading) would be obvious.(03-23-2014, 10:26 PM)milo Wrote: Accentual verse was quite popular just 1000 years ago, let's bring it back! Seriously though, it tends to work better if you are singing it with a specific melody, maybe include a bongo!
I have never been a big fan of accentual verse in modern english poetry, line breaks won't provide the regularity through reading to give a true rhythm. Also, it tends to be particularly ineffective with short clipped lines (anything less than 4 beats, really).
Well, I know you're a fan of meter, so you are saying accentual verse is stress count only, not necessarily regular?
Nope, no plans to sing it, even with a bongo to drown me out.
Now, if you are insistent on using archaic, clownish poetic devices, you may as well pack some alliterstion in.
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