Hai kuckoo 2 (for erthona)

[ChristopherSea]

I like the idea of creating an extended poem from a series of Haiku. You may think it was easy to avoid rhyming, but you dropped one with swarm/warm before the double-cuckoo.

it's pretty common though ususally it consists of a haiku and a two line follow on then another haiku etc. usually two or more people take part in the thing which is called a hokku. it consted of 7 lines total.(which is a line as we know it but not in actuality because it was in japanese .). i'm not sure but i think it was from this that basho and co devise the haiku (by anothor name i can't remember)

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Dawn opens window.
Air cools me but I sleep on.
Dawn…shut the window.

i got a kick from this one and the line

Soon all day Sunday.

it has a japanese sound to it

Thanks for taking the time to explain the Hoku 'extended haiku' for me billy.