03-23-2014, 03:57 AM
[quote='Erthona' pid='157987' dateline='1395248304']
Chris,
Anything to keep the Haiku/Senyru definition controversy going, right? OK Dale, it that is legit, than is this?
Of course, anything goes. This is an online magazine,so to speak,and since someone did it here it must make it a Senryū, right? Ipsp facto, so is yours. Ever read "Gulliver's Travels"? The only problem is that yours rhymes. chedder-better. It would be better if you wrote
Paco says sharp cheddar
is better with
Luchetta’s sweet taco
Yes, it is better with the simple edit!
Chris,
Anything to keep the Haiku/Senyru definition controversy going, right? OK Dale, it that is legit, than is this?
Of course, anything goes. This is an online magazine,so to speak,and since someone did it here it must make it a Senryū, right? Ipsp facto, so is yours. Ever read "Gulliver's Travels"? The only problem is that yours rhymes. chedder-better. It would be better if you wrote
Paco says sharp cheddar
is better with
Luchetta’s sweet taco
Yes, it is better with the simple edit!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris