Against the Sea

[Carousal]

I am not a cliché hunter; others are and will pounce on a cliché like a cat on mouse. I look at the whole poem with the object of seeing signs of promise in a new writer.
I could tell you in detail what I feel is wrong in your poem but its far better for you to read and absorb poetry that’s attractive to you and so adapt your own poetry accordantly.

Regards Cari