The Roman Sonnet

[L Oquence]

I now understand your hasty rush though the serious workshop section.

It was for this.... this...

My apologies for my first impressions. I'm still learning to fully critique poetry. I want to learn as much as possible about written poetry, as it truly fascinates me. I just struggle with good critiquing sometimes.
Anyway, I'll assume by the tone of your post the poem was sub par. Like I said, I don't have much experience in the realm of poetry, yet. And the first time we rode a bike we fell, I expect the same from my poems.