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Missing You
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03-20-2014, 11:16 AM
(03-20-2014, 04:42 AM)rowens Wrote: Are you comfortable with the awkward usage that goes on for most of this poem? Do you think the rhymes seem forced?I am comfortable with it. Even in prose writing, I tend to write in awkward phrasings, or so I have been told many, many times. I did not think the rhymes in this piece seemed forced, so I will assume that I was wrong since you took the time to ask. |
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Missing You - by Deaf Cat in the Blue Hat - 03-19-2014, 11:08 PM
RE: Missing You - by rowens - 03-20-2014, 04:42 AM
RE: Missing You - by Deaf Cat in the Blue Hat - 03-20-2014, 11:16 AM
RE: Missing You - by rowens - 03-20-2014, 09:51 PM
RE: Missing You - by Deaf Cat in the Blue Hat - 03-21-2014, 12:06 AM
RE: Missing You - by rowens - 03-21-2014, 12:20 AM
RE: Missing You - by Deaf Cat in the Blue Hat - 03-21-2014, 12:47 AM
RE: Missing You - by rowens - 03-21-2014, 01:01 AM
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