03-20-2014, 01:58 AM
Chris,
Anything to keep the Haiku/Senyru definition controversy going, right? OK Dale, it that is legit, than is this?
Of course, anything goes. This is an online magazine,so to speak,and since someone did it here it must make it a Senryū, right? Ipsp facto, so is yours. Ever read "Gulliver's Travels"? The only problem is that yours rhymes. chedder-better. It would be better if you wrote
Paco says sharp cheddar
is better with
Luchetta’s sweet taco
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Tom
"to rhyme
is not a sin like gluttony."
That depends on what the definition of "is" is.
Thanks for playing,
Dale
Anything to keep the Haiku/Senyru definition controversy going, right? OK Dale, it that is legit, than is this?
Of course, anything goes. This is an online magazine,so to speak,and since someone did it here it must make it a Senryū, right? Ipsp facto, so is yours. Ever read "Gulliver's Travels"? The only problem is that yours rhymes. chedder-better. It would be better if you wrote
Paco says sharp cheddar
is better with
Luchetta’s sweet taco
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Tom
"to rhyme
is not a sin like gluttony."
That depends on what the definition of "is" is.
Thanks for playing,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.