03-19-2014, 08:20 PM
Lovely image and a sensual piece. In the spirit of the form's brevity you could add a comma after night and drop: with, still, a. Thanks for the read.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
|
Haiku: A Wetness
|
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
Haiku: A Wetness - by 71degrees - 03-19-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: Haiku: A Wetness - by ChristopherSea - 03-19-2014, 08:20 PM
RE: Haiku: A Wetness - by 71degrees - 03-19-2014, 11:36 PM
RE: Haiku: A Wetness - by billy - 03-22-2014, 04:58 PM
RE: Haiku: A Wetness - by milo - 03-22-2014, 10:48 PM
|
Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)