03-19-2014, 01:44 AM
I think this one is really strong. I like the mask of normalcy, what we think others will perceive as normal.
And the end, a sledgehammer.
"Nobody would miss you, I wouldn't;
but if you took somebody I actually loved:
That would be different."
The whole thing rang with a true tone for me, well done.
And the end, a sledgehammer.
"Nobody would miss you, I wouldn't;
but if you took somebody I actually loved:
That would be different."
The whole thing rang with a true tone for me, well done.
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