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03-18-2014, 06:36 PM

(03-18-2014, 11:07 AM)jeremyyoung Wrote: Rhyming couplets Christopher rhyming couplets

Yes, I see them. Perhaps, they just look gangly to me and I need a prompt to take a breath. I will think about restructuring the piece.

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Avant-garde-n - by ChristopherSea - 02-25-2014, 06:18 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n - by geoff - 02-25-2014, 09:57 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n - by ChristopherSea - 02-25-2014, 08:46 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by Erthona - 02-26-2014, 08:47 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by geoff - 02-26-2014, 09:14 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by ChristopherSea - 02-26-2014, 09:45 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 1) - by Erthona - 02-26-2014, 02:21 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 02-26-2014, 07:19 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by Erthona - 02-27-2014, 12:36 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 02-27-2014, 02:11 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by Erthona - 03-03-2014, 01:36 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 03-03-2014, 09:26 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-17-2014, 11:30 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 09:39 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 10:55 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by jeremyyoung - 03-18-2014, 11:07 AM

RE: Avant-garde-n (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 03-18-2014, 06:36 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 02:03 PM

RE: Avant-garde-n - by ChristopherSea - 04-08-2014, 06:37 PM

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