03-18-2014, 09:37 AM
I have been tongue bitingly polite.
My advice is to calm down, let the feedback come in, stop fiddling with the piece until the feedback stops, and then consider what you want to do.... hence my suggestion of thought and reflection.
But failing that, try counting 8 beats on a line, four lines to a verse, try to find a rhyme and possibly add some word play or puns.
My advice is to calm down, let the feedback come in, stop fiddling with the piece until the feedback stops, and then consider what you want to do.... hence my suggestion of thought and reflection.
But failing that, try counting 8 beats on a line, four lines to a verse, try to find a rhyme and possibly add some word play or puns.