03-18-2014, 04:44 AM
I would welcome comments on the changes I've made so far.
tectak:
Another edit has hopefully helped the fragmented thoughts throughout the stanzas. I'll try to focus on that as I continue.
tectak:
Another edit has hopefully helped the fragmented thoughts throughout the stanzas. I'll try to focus on that as I continue.
(03-17-2014, 10:25 PM)jeremyyoung Wrote: It doesn't surprise me, to do so would require thought and perspective.I see that requiring people to comment has not guided them to be helpful, or even polite.