Policy
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I liked the original, I like the revisions, I like the poem.

The revisions tighten it. And give it a beautiful somber tone.
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Policy - by geoff - 03-13-2014, 11:48 AM
RE: bereavement policy - by tomoffing - 03-13-2014, 12:33 PM
RE: bereavement policy - by milo - 03-13-2014, 01:58 PM
RE: bereavement policy - by jeremyyoung - 03-13-2014, 09:35 PM
RE: bereavement policy - by ChristopherSea - 03-14-2014, 12:57 AM
RE: bereavement policy - by tectak - 03-14-2014, 03:13 AM
RE: bereavement policy - by abu nuwas - 03-14-2014, 06:42 AM
RE: bereavement policy - by geoff - 03-14-2014, 10:44 AM
RE: Policy - by trueenigma - 03-14-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: Policy - by jeremyyoung - 03-15-2014, 03:32 AM



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