03-12-2014, 09:45 PM
I agree about the cliches but then most of us use them when we start writing poetry, a useful tip is never to write anything you read in a gift card.
Even the Sun
Had chosen to hide beneath the Clouds.
The images are evident but think about the word ‘even’ and ask yourself where else would the sun find to hide in daylight unless it was behind the clouds.
Regards Carousal
Even the Sun
Had chosen to hide beneath the Clouds.
The images are evident but think about the word ‘even’ and ask yourself where else would the sun find to hide in daylight unless it was behind the clouds.
Regards Carousal