Love
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This is kinda far out. Lines like "Be still : know yourself :" or "your inner needs : you are but one : together" make the poem feel very new age to me.

The runic bits seem cool with "Ice" while the english sections feel warmer: "move to the light" "double sun" so there is kinda of a push pull going on there, it almost makes me think of northern Europe, though i've never been there. Sunrise over an icey landscape.

It would be interesting to hear this one performed. I don't think I get it conceptually but its interesting JMHO thnx 4 sharing.
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Love - by jeremyyoung - 03-08-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: Love - by 71degrees - 03-10-2014, 12:03 PM
RE: Love - by jeremyyoung - 03-10-2014, 12:05 PM
RE: Love - by 71degrees - 03-10-2014, 11:53 PM
RE: Love - by jeremyyoung - 03-10-2014, 11:58 PM
RE: Love - by makeshift - 03-11-2014, 04:38 AM
RE: Love - by jeremyyoung - 03-11-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Love - by TamyPocer777 - 03-19-2014, 01:15 AM



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