What has she done to me? I've gone all soppy.

[jeremyyoung]

It's a bit dogrel. The sentiment is sweet. And I have no problem with the rhyme scheme, and formal structure, but I would like a few more enjambments, to break up the hard line stops.

Also 'grow and grow' - either just 'grow' or maybe something like 'sow and grow', 'plough and grow', etc. Just something extra.

Though it is nice that you are soppy and in love