03-10-2014, 05:51 AM
(03-10-2014, 05:45 AM)justcloudy Wrote: Milo you said there were some comments made on mine in the other group, and I'm trying to find them but that place is making my head spin. Cntrl F isn't helping either. Am I blind or were you mistaken?No comments on yours yet, just true, jm, tomoff and ella.
And thanks to the many of you who are making kind comments about my rough little piece. Milo-- if I revise it (not promising anything though) where should I post the revision?
If you revise, post it as a regular poem in the critical forums. It is yours now, you own it forever.

