Poetry Telephone Complete!

[milo]

Milo you said there were some comments made on mine in the other group, and I'm trying to find them but that place is making my head spin. Cntrl F isn't helping either. Am I blind or were you mistaken?

And thanks to the many of you who are making kind comments about my rough little piece. Milo-- if I revise it (not promising anything though) where should I post the revision?

No comments on yours yet, just true, jm, tomoff and ella.

If you revise, post it as a regular poem in the critical forums. It is yours now, you own it forever.