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Transposon*
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03-08-2014, 07:10 AM
I have been reading this poem over the last few days and developing my feelings toward it. What impresses me the most is the theme of what you are saying. In the second verse I connect loafs with brains and I like the way you compare our brains/loafs to wheat. The whole question of creation is an interesting one which this poems focuses on and suceeds in illuminating.
Relax, nothing is under control
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Transposon* - by Erthona - 03-05-2014, 11:51 AM
RE: Transposon* - by ChristopherSea - 03-06-2014, 06:23 AM
RE: Transposon* - by heslopian - 03-06-2014, 07:23 AM
RE: Transposon* - by jeremyyoung - 03-06-2014, 11:52 PM
RE: Transposon* - by Erthona - 03-07-2014, 05:18 AM
RE: Transposon* - by heslopian - 03-08-2014, 09:57 AM
RE: Transposon* - by jeremyyoung - 03-07-2014, 06:00 AM
RE: Transposon* - by Erthona - 03-07-2014, 09:14 AM
RE: Transposon* - by billy - 03-07-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: Transposon* - by Erthona - 03-07-2014, 12:58 PM
RE: Transposon* - by cfgorman - 03-08-2014, 07:10 AM
RE: Transposon* - by NobodyNothing - 03-08-2014, 12:38 PM
RE: Transposon* - by Erthona - 03-08-2014, 06:10 PM
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