03-07-2014, 10:55 PM
Your title
encompasses a lot of
religious and political diatribe
for me! Love how this one begins
and ends. You know you have a
concrete poem here if you center align
it and make some alternate line breaks.
It could be a globe or god's eye;
bold a couple words and you
have a mote in god's eye.
Thanks for sharing
this./Chris
encompasses a lot of
religious and political diatribe
for me! Love how this one begins
and ends. You know you have a
concrete poem here if you center align
it and make some alternate line breaks.
It could be a globe or god's eye;
bold a couple words and you
have a mote in god's eye.
Thanks for sharing
this./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris