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A House in Autumn
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03-07-2014, 11:50 AM
The original phrase was "horny lover's", not "girlish", but I felt that that was cliche, somehow. Thank you for your kind and helpful feedback, Mr. Sea, it helps a lot
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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