Driving Back to the Apartment (passanger seat)

[ChristopherSea]

Thnx for the replies, PoetryAndPhysics, visualcondyle, and ChristopherSea.

If the boyfriend is actually the black hole

@ChristopherSea, Hmmm, there is no intended boyfriend >.< its about a drive with my brother. I'm not sure if the reader needs to know that though. What implied the presence of a boyfriend? The narrator is the supposed to be the "black hole" THnx


Anyway i've edited the op. I may still be fighting with some ambiguity, i'm not sure.

It doesn't have to be a boyfriend any more than it has to be a brother. As it reads, it could be a nebulous party as well. The distance between us made be think of the former. It seemed to have more depth of meaning for me with two lovers in the car. I'll take a look at the new edit.