Kindly, Go Away

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Kindly, Go Away (First Edit)

I know, of course, it, Love, can not be lost.
It can however ",however,"
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond
and that absence is felt.
I know, of course, the gut rot pain will pass
but so did he.
He, like an asteroid that breezed so beautifully past
only to be compelled into a crater-- done
I know, of course, by you. I really like the "I know, of course," throughout. it draws me further in each time, like a mental checkpoint
Death This word appears to leave to the next line, but as I it aloud it doesn't connect. It reads "Death desist, acquit," and I feel I'm missing some meaning. Is death being mentioned as an entity or is it an occurrence or something else; it stands out but not in a good way for me.
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond;
you will never be felt period here?

Kindly, Go Away

I know, of course, it, love, can not be lost.
It can however
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond
and that absence is felt.
I know, of course, the gut rot pain will pass
but so did he.
He, like an asteroid that breezed so beautifully past
only to be compelled into a crater-- done
I know, of course, by you, the cosmic joke no one finds funny.
Death
desist, acquit, just cease to be, abscond;
you will never be felt

I like the style of the poem and I do prefer the new line change in the editted version, good choice.