Love Muse
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Milo,

Sorry, just being dumb all week. Allergies or medication, whatever the reason I can't seem to think well, one reason I've cut back on critiques.

"bathes" good catch, changed
Poet's- changed
and the "noun to noun" I think I have resolved.

You'll have to let me know since I can't trust my thinking at the moment it seems.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-27-2014, 01:30 PM
RE: Love Muse - by milo - 02-27-2014, 01:37 PM
RE: Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-27-2014, 02:15 PM
RE: Love Muse - by milo - 02-27-2014, 02:18 PM
RE: Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-28-2014, 12:30 AM
RE: Love Muse - by ellajam - 02-28-2014, 05:55 AM
RE: Love Muse - by Erthona - 02-28-2014, 09:44 AM



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