02-25-2014, 09:58 PM
(02-25-2014, 04:13 PM)gravity1665 Wrote:Hi, gravity, welcome.(02-25-2014, 10:09 AM)rowens Wrote: If the poem is supposed to show broken pieces, lost fragments and stripped foundations, it at least does that.Yeah I should probably have put the quote which inspired my poem up as well eh? well here it is.
"...that just when it looks like life is falling apart, it may be
falling together for the first time."
It's best when writing off an inspiration to not depend on it to carry your work. Try putting it aside and see it you poem makes sense on it's own.
If you'e going to post the quote you need to credit it. You can add the author by clicking edit on your post.
Again, welcome.
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