02-25-2014, 11:51 AM
Hello Geoff,
Very nice feedback! You pointed out things I had already questioned myself, so it's reassuring to hear that my suspicions were at least well founded. Special thanks for the careful attention on the trochee in the final line. I will be sure to revise accordingly.
(Sorry if this popped up a few times. I'm not the most forum-savvy fella)
Very nice feedback! You pointed out things I had already questioned myself, so it's reassuring to hear that my suspicions were at least well founded. Special thanks for the careful attention on the trochee in the final line. I will be sure to revise accordingly.
(Sorry if this popped up a few times. I'm not the most forum-savvy fella)