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02-25-2014, 11:02 AM
(02-25-2014, 11:01 AM)Iowa Wrote:  Steel spikes piercing clouds
Imprisoned with visions of pure freedom
Living, yet confined, in the heavens
Flight
Living, yet brief, brought to earth
Released to dark crowded pavement
Concrete grids disrupting graves

Thank you.
so . . . the spikes are living, yet confined?
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Nothing Special - by Iowa - 02-25-2014, 11:01 AM
RE: Nothing Special - by milo - 02-25-2014, 11:02 AM
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RE: Nothing Special - by milo - 02-25-2014, 11:36 AM
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