Everything is still here

[tomoffing]

thanks for the kind words and excellent critique folks,

kindofahippy,
seems that I've skewed your interpretation, of stanzas 2 & 3 in particular.
Let me work on the tenses and conjugations. I will try to bring more clarity there.

And for your suggested edits. I've been unhappy with the echoes, shed and reflection images you pointed out, so your reinforcement is much appreciated.
A couple of others I'm attached to and will just have to stay i'm afraid.

71,
This is absolutely not intended to be purely about the physical things.
The deeper metaphor is there for me but I obviously have not illuminated it sufficiently.


thanks again t